Saturday, June 28, 2008

Hello

Hey Everyone!
Today I was told by a friend that I should have a blog of mine where I should post my poems, so I thought it would be a great opportunity to get some critical feedback from all of u and also an opportunity to reach out to new people.
All u readers please give me proper feedback after reading the poems, tell me how u exactly find it, in order for me to be able to improer my self
The blog is also an opportunity to meet new people

1 comment:

Excel Philospher said...

Was good read but not fascinating.....sorry but thats what i felt.....It should be rhythmic....to some extent....else it becomes a paragraph not a poem